Can anyone critique my haiku trio?

I really like the part in (sun) about the "blazing embers glow". not many people use those words, I like it. I really like how in rain it talks about soldiers, but it focuses on 1 scene in particular where as wind and sun talk about the feeling of them. the feeling of the embers-wait, that talks about a camp fire, if that's what you're going for, you've got it! sun talks about a campfire, wind talks about wind, rain talks about a war and soldiers staying dry and alive.