Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Is this description of a character too purple-prosey?

It'a good, but leaning toward purple prose. Maybe try to take out a few adjectives. The method I use for this sort of thing is look through my whole excerpt, find adjectives, and highlight them (in Word, or whatever) and then I read the sentences to see what adjectives are necessary. I take out the unnecessary ones. Good luck!

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